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Freedom

Tears streak down my saddened face
I am lost in this wretched place
There is nowhere left for me
No one will ever let me be

Regret rides on sorrow

Life seems to be my curse
But choosing between life and death, I do not know what’s worst
Although my pain will never subside
There is no use to run or hide

I must live for tomorrow

Lost in this forsaken haze
Never awakening from this daze
I am cold and lonely
And if only

My heart weren't so weak

But after all it doesn't matter in the end
No one will be there, not even your friend
Your trust belongs to you and you alone
Let your heart turn to stone.

Freedom is all I seek
©2005-2009 ~Tenksei
:icontenksei:

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I just came up with this and It seems to be a crowd favorite lol ^^

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:iconjoshrb2004:
I can totally agree on the subject, it has a nice flow and great rhymings :-) :+fav:
:icontenksei:
lol I'm glad you liked it ^^

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Time, the master of all illusions, permits growth, offers the chance for us to mature... Every moment spent worrying over trivialities is wasted...
:icondisguisedagenda:
you did an excellent job. i love the flow of the poem..it kind of reminds me of my own style, so a must fav.

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Some people are a lot like Slinkies - They're not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.
:icontenksei:
Heh Thanks, Umm which poem might I ask? lol

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Time, the master of all illusions, permits growth, offers the chance for us to mature... Every moment spent worrying over trivialities is wasted...
:icondisguisedagenda:
which poem what?

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Some people are a lot like Slinkies - They're not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.
:icontenksei:
I think I've honestly forgotten...I've got the worst memory ever lol

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Time, the master of all illusions, permits growth, offers the chance for us to mature... Every moment spent worrying over trivialities is wasted...
:icondisguisedagenda:
lol my memory sucks also. hey there is something i want you to check out if you already havent. go to ~PoetryBattle . its a group that me and life-and-death and a few othres have set up. its pretty cool, you should join.

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Some people are a lot like Slinkies - They're not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.
:icondisguisedagenda:
lol my memory sucks also. hey there is something i want you to check out if you already havent. go to ~PoetryBattle . its a group that me and life-and-death and a few othres have set up. its pretty cool, you should join.

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Some people are a lot like Slinkies - They're not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.
:icondisguisedagenda:
lol my memory sucks also. hey there is something i want you to check out if you already havent. go to ~PoetryBattle . its a group that me and life-and-death and a few othres have set up. its pretty cool, you should join.

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Some people are a lot like Slinkies - They're not really good for anything, but they still bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs.

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